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Post by pablo on Oct 27, 2016 10:35:09 GMT -5
Sunfire Reserve - Not Approved
Too many autogenerated elements to be approved. The bunkering created by the designer is a bit repetitive, and the terrain work is a bit lacking.
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Post by pablo on Oct 30, 2016 2:54:31 GMT -5
Castle of Glass (thursday) - Not Approved
Autogenerated course
Castle of Glass (Friday through sunday) - Not Approved
Only submit one version of the course please
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Post by Dave on Oct 30, 2016 7:04:18 GMT -5
Castle of Glass (thursday) - Not Approved Autogenerated course Castle of Glass (Friday through sunday) - Not Approved Only submit one version of the course please Hi, Thanks for the feedback, not sure what "autogenerated" means, if you mean that the course has not been modified from the original generation then you couldnt be further from the truth, all holes, the two main lakes, hills, roads and props have been created, it took around 5 publications and 48 hours of perfecting before the final product was published. Apologies for the additional 3 courses though, this was my first attempt. Dave
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Post by pablo on Oct 30, 2016 7:10:16 GMT -5
Castle of Glass (thursday) - Not Approved Autogenerated course Castle of Glass (Friday through sunday) - Not Approved Only submit one version of the course please Hi, Thanks for the feedback, not sure what "autogenerated" means, if you mean that the course has not been modified from the original generation then you couldnt be further from the truth, all holes, the two main lakes, hills, roads and props have been created, it took around 5 publications and 48 hours of perfecting before the final product was published. Apologies for the additional 3 courses though, this was my first attempt. Dave Yes Dave, the course has been modified, I did not mean you just published after the creation. But the whole terrain sculpting, the surfaces and a great part of the elements of the course remain untouched. If you want, I can have another reviewer to play the course, or I can play it again and show you the elements that have kept me away from approving the course. By no means I wanted to state you did nothing with the course. You actually did. But the course is lacking the extra elements that could make it a good course.
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Post by Dave on Oct 30, 2016 7:14:39 GMT -5
Please if you dont mind, if you can play it again and point out what needs improving, I like the course layout and hole design so if i can make changes while keeping the basic design of the course as it is, that would be great.
Thanks again.
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Post by pablo on Oct 30, 2016 9:44:12 GMT -5
Please if you dont mind, if you can play it again and point out what needs improving, I like the course layout and hole design so if i can make changes while keeping the basic design of the course as it is, that would be great. Thanks again. Rest assured, I will do it Done - Check Your PM
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Post by bassman70 on Oct 30, 2016 12:33:05 GMT -5
Coyote Lakes G.C. Arizona- Not Approved
This course is not a bad attempt. The course is playable, BUT there is no real variety here. The holes are flat, the fairways and the rough surrounding them needs work. I'm not saying it's auto generated, but the sheer size and amount of the light rough on every hole just seems odd. All of the bunkers are flat, the greens are flat, and some of the plants are just GIGANTIC. The course needs polish, and the designer could benefit from looking at some tutorials. I appreciate the fact that the course is made for the lowers skilled players, but it just doesn't quite get to the point where it should be, to be in our data base. I hope the designer continues on with designing, because I really think he could do much better with just a little guidance.
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Post by Dave on Oct 30, 2016 15:26:53 GMT -5
Please if you dont mind, if you can play it again and point out what needs improving, I like the course layout and hole design so if i can make changes while keeping the basic design of the course as it is, that would be great. Thanks again. Rest assured, I will do it Done - Check Your PM Many thanks
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Post by pablo on Oct 30, 2016 15:34:10 GMT -5
Welcome!
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Post by Dave on Nov 5, 2016 19:44:16 GMT -5
Hello there,
Course resubmitted with comments taken on board and hopefully improved! Please feel free to PM feedback, good or bad!
Thanks!
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Post by pablo on Nov 6, 2016 14:22:47 GMT -5
Hello there,
Course resubmitted with comments taken on board and hopefully improved! Please feel free to PM feedback, good or bad!
Thanks!
It's on the list to be reviewed by me or by some of the other members of the reviewing staff. If you want my advice, no matter the result of these improvements you've done, I'd suggest you move on to the next course. Use what you've learned, and apply it. Sometimes getting "obsessed" (and I don't mean literally, you get what I mean) is not good
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Post by pablo on Nov 8, 2016 14:16:35 GMT -5
Turkeyfoot GC & Lodge-Winter - Not Approved
This one is not a bad effort. But it lacks the required polishing required. Lots of sculpting needed in the bunkers, some of the tees are blocked by ugly mounds in front of them. The first cut appears and disappears randomly, making the fairways look unconsistent.
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Post by Dave on Nov 25, 2016 18:48:54 GMT -5
Ive submitted a course but need to recall as made a few changes, will resubmit when ready. Sorry!
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Post by pablo on Nov 27, 2016 12:42:45 GMT -5
Ive submitted a course but need to recall as made a few changes, will resubmit when ready. Sorry! If it's Tor Bridge I'll reject it until further notice from you
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Post by Dave on Nov 27, 2016 14:58:41 GMT -5
Thanks Pablo.
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