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Post by junyuh on Jun 27, 2019 20:13:56 GMT -5
A fictional course located on the rural northeast coast. The first 13 holes play inland and the closing holes wrap around the coast. Any feedback would be very much appreciated.
Theme: Delta Par: 72
Yardage Red: 6458 White: 6923 Black: 7357
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Post by junyuh on Jun 27, 2019 20:33:45 GMT -5
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Post by ohheycat on Jun 27, 2019 20:57:52 GMT -5
Fun course. Never did quite find my swing this round but -10 after an opening double isnt bad at all. Thanks for making it
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Post by gregfordyce on Jun 29, 2019 7:40:01 GMT -5
Heck of a first publish. Like your planting and bunkerwork, green complexes are nicely done. Some great views off the tee on many holes. Plays fun and challenging. Teeboxes are interesting - on some of them where they are on the edge of steep drop-offs with stairs down to the next one, it works with the surrounding topography,but generally I think they'd look better if you blended them into the surrounding terrain by using the soft fuzzy flatten brush on/around them. As is, most of them seem artificially-raised up and out of place next to the surrounding terrain contours. I love the stream and falls on #4. Your overall rock-work is outstanding. The thick grass throughout the course, and the unique bunker on #5 (like a small "church pews" similar to Oakmont) is very cool. And #18 is one of the better-looking finishing holes I've seen. I could honestly picture this course being used in a tournament. My only other suggestions would be look at the edges of a few fairways here and there, where it looks like you missed with the soft fuzzy brush (and very few of these), and some questionable lumps here and there on/close to fairways that look a bit out of place contouring-wise (fairway around #10 green, for instance). From a purely aesthetic point of view, you have a great artistic eye, and the only places I didn't really like the vegetation were a few shorelines where you used "Bullrushes," which look ugly from a distance IMO, plus you only planted a small section of the shoreline in places (like on #9, #14); the unplanted remainder contrasts with it sharply. A couple of pins (like pin #2 on hole #9) had some yellow near them within the 9 boxes. But really, I'm just being nitpicky with that - overall you made great use of the Delta theme here, and I'm confident in saying you are going to make one hell of a designer after you get a few more courses under your belt if this is any indication. Really, really well-done!
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