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Post by JTG_7708 on Jul 30, 2022 13:25:02 GMT -5
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Post by b101 on Jul 31, 2022 7:18:34 GMT -5
Lots to like - I'd say the main thing to look at is the bunkering - mostly the shaping. Try to make them more distinctive, as they're just kinda there at the moment rather than really adding visually to the holes - mattf27 courses are a great starting point for reference. Additionally, try to give the fairway/greens a bit more space from the bunkers, as they are pretty close in spots and try to wrap the bunkers into the fairway more - see image below. There's also a little planting encroaching into areas you don't want. Good start!  |
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Post by JTG_7708 on Jul 31, 2022 15:31:44 GMT -5
Thank you for giving feedback! i followed your advice and fixed the bunkers and i would like you to let me know if this is what you were talking about, and how i can make it better.  |
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Post by b101 on Aug 1, 2022 1:26:25 GMT -5
Good stuff! Certainly looking better sculpting wise - I still think you can do a bit more with the shaping of them, but that is stylistic and more of a choice thing.
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