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Post by Terry Grayson on Feb 17, 2018 14:22:02 GMT -5
Hey gang Upon finishing Tombstone and to carry upon that theme I began toying with the idea of this one...... May even have a little story involving some of the "characters" around here involved....... Its definitely not going to be a 14 day course just one I am toying with for the moment.... I will add to this WIP thread occasionally and once I began to "tell the story" please feel free to join in and add anything you'd like to the story.... Ill give the background of the story soon ...Then we can begin.. ha ha ha May be fun, may be stupid, may get deleted, but I will see where it leads for a bit Five holes built somewhat zero planting cept round the grave there on the hill.... Terry PS: That dang house took forever to build out of Fence railing...and bridges.....
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Post by mrooola on Feb 17, 2018 14:32:30 GMT -5
Cool house
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2018 17:26:17 GMT -5
You'd score pretty high in a fantasy contest with that use of "objects." Right @griff?
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Post by Terry Grayson on Feb 17, 2018 22:43:48 GMT -5
In 1880 and 1881 in Big Whiskey, Wyoming, Little Griff Daggett, the local sheriff and former gunfighter, does not allow guns or criminals in his town. Two cowboys, Quick Justin Fowler and "TreeWood" Bunting, disfigure Delilah Fitzgerald As punishment for the cowboys, Little Griff allows them to pay compensation to the brothel owner, Skinny Larry Malone. The rest of the gals, led by Strawberry Alice, are infuriated by this leniency and offer a $1,000 reward to whoever can kill the cowboys. Miles away in Kansas, the Schofield Kessler Kid, a boastful young man, visits the pig farm of William Nesbit Munny, seeking to recruit him to help kill the cowboys. In his youth, Munny was a bandit, notorious for being a cold-blooded murderer. Now a repentant widower raising two children, he has sworn off alcohol and killing. Though Munny initially refuses to help, his farm is failing, putting his children's future in jeopardy. Munny reconsiders a few days later and sets off to catch up with the Kid. On his way, Munny recruits his friend Justin "Ned" Ciboch, another retired gunfighter. Munny, Ciboch and the Kid arrive later during a rain storm and head into the saloon to discover the cowboys' location. With a bad fever after riding in the rain, Munny is sitting alone in the saloon when Little Griff and his deputies arrive to confront him. Not realizing Munny's identity, Little Griff beats him and kicks him out of the saloon after finding that he is carrying a pistol. Ciboch and the Kid Kessler, upstairs , escape out a back window. The three regroup at a barn outside town, where they nurse Munny back to health. Three days later, they ambush a group of cowboys and kill Treewood Bunting, though Ned Ciboch and Eric Munny show that they no longer have much stomach for murder. Ciboch decides to return home while Munny feels they must finish the job. Munny and the Kid head to the cowboys' ranch, where the Kid ambushes Quick Justin Fowler in an outhouse and kills him. After they escape, a distraught Kid confesses he had never killed anyone before and renounces life as a gunfighter. When Little Sue meets the two men to give them the reward, they learn that Ned Ciboch was captured by Little Griffs men and tortured to death—but not before revealing Munny's identity. The Kid heads back to Kansas to deliver the reward money to Munny's children and Ciboch' wife, while an embittered Munny—finishing Cibochs bottle of whiskey, after not drinking for years—returns to town to take revenge on Little Griff. That night, Munny arrives and sees Ciboch's corpse displayed in a coffin outside the saloon with a sign reading "This Is What Happens To Assassins Around Here". Inside, Little Griff has assembled a posse to pursue Munny and the Kid. Munny walks in alone and kills Dubois. After some tense dialogue, a gunfight ensues, leaving Griff wounded and several of his deputies dead. Griff promises to "see [Munny] in hell" before Munny executes him. Munny then threatens the townsfolk before finally leaving Big Whiskey, warning that he will return for more vengeance if Ciboch is not buried properly or if any of the females are harmed. A title card epilogue says that Munny moved to Pennsylvania with his children where he prospered in surgical equipment sales. As the story is told, a local Big Whiskey resident, Terry Grayson a retired peace officer sets out on a conquest to learn the true story, and to find the long lost William "Nesbit" Munny. Is the story as was told from 1881? What will we learn and what shall the story uncover TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Terry Grayson on Feb 26, 2018 17:39:44 GMT -5
Grayson as previously mentioned happened upon this story before retirement. He had heard of the many stories of William "Nesbit" Munny and began to study the loose history of his origins and his past. A vile individual throughout most of his adult life, it wasn't until "Nesbit" met his wife in the hills of Pennsylvania that he settled down and begun to walk away from the nefarious lifestyle he was so known for. Years passed and Nesbit's lovely wife became ill with the small pox and passed away.. By this time Nesbit and his wife had moved into the territory and became a farmer of the barren landscape miles away from the nearest town. Nesbit on a hill nearest his homestead buried his wife with a small marked gravesite that rumors persist, stands until this day. Nesbit tried to live peacefully with his children until the day the "Kessler Kid" came a' callin. With tales of big money coming their way, the Kessler kid fed upon Nesbit's past and lured him away from his family to pursue the Quick Justin and Treewood Bunting for what "they had dun" As Nesbit walked into the sunlight toward the grave of his widow the thoughts of his past lingered in his mind like the many jugs of whiskey he had consumed in his previous life. As he knelt down to tell his wife of what he was about to do, the sun glaring down upon him he knew that the quick bucks made could give he and his children the life they wanted away from the killing and horror of this landscape. As Nesbit, Kessler left upon their horses Nesbit knew this would not be possible without the help of his long time friend "Ned" Ciboch. Ciboch was a dead aim with his "Scofield" rifle and could shoot the eye out of a gnat at 200 yards. Upon meeting with Ned immediately he was not impressed with the Kessler kid, who he deemed a smart mouth who for some reason was fascinated with "Japanese" words that no one understood. Away toward Big Whiskey they rode, throughout the night until the approached a barn on the outskirts of town. As they set up on the barn throughout the night to get their first glimpse of Quick Justin and Treewood Bunting the story becomes clearer and what exactly had to be done and the blood bath that occurred shortly thereafter TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Violinguy69 on Feb 27, 2018 14:15:48 GMT -5
No pigs. Too bad.
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Post by statelyowl on Mar 3, 2018 17:43:46 GMT -5
Seems like no one is surviving this story.... but it is a page turner!
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Post by pablo on Mar 4, 2018 7:18:51 GMT -5
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Post by Terry Grayson on Mar 5, 2018 8:07:51 GMT -5
So not sure if I will finish the "Story" or not here is where I am
The course is essentially complete... All 18 built so construction is done...
When I reached about hole 13 I looked up noticed the plant meter had about 2 to 2 3/4 of usable space and thought, OH NO!!! ha ha ha... I went all the way back to hole 6 and 7 completed changed these two used rocks/boulders a water feature and upon Nesbits thoughts utilized some waste bunker type features that was on hole one to complete the process.. I was almost near a point of scrapping the entire project because I did not want to lose the look I was after but I was finally able to carry the look/feel throughout like I wanted... honest to goodness when I planted my last tree on 18 I got the "PLANT METER FULL" message... So may not be room for the stuff around clubhouse...unless i delete an item or a hundred..
I have multi- teed the course and mult-pinned it as well but in some playthrough last night some of these pins WHOA!!! ha ha.. its a very long course even number 9 on pin four is about 660 however it can be reached in two "if you hit the proper shot" ...Probably going to play from the tips best with tour clubs (well I know it will) but Hopefully you can use any set, but I aimed for this to be a bit more challenging than my norm..
Ill button this dog track up the next couple days and either finish the story or just say everyone but Nesbit Munny died.. LMAO
Hope its well received there are some pretty good holes out there...
#5 and #9 may be the best two holes I have ever built (Which probably isnt saying a lot but I like em) ha ha ha ha
Probably released in the next few days or maybe this weekend as we are moving my communications center this week to a new home.... And the headaches and stress that goes with that to make sure we can get people the help they need is going to take top priority for me this week
ok im done
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Post by Deleted on Mar 5, 2018 21:01:26 GMT -5
Hole 5 is a gem, I can vouch for that!
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Post by TreeWood on Mar 6, 2018 3:46:42 GMT -5
Shitty story. I last 3 just paragraphs! 😵 j/k !!
Course looks great! 🙂 I know I’m looking forward to this. Love your courses Terry!
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Post by Terry Grayson on Mar 6, 2018 8:11:19 GMT -5
ROFL Rob...... Yeah you checked out early. ha ha ha
With all going on at work and trying to get that finished today and tomorrow Ill end story with
EVERYONE DIES eventually (Well except me) Blah blah, found a grave, found a barn, built a course, etc etc etc, crap story, dog track of a course.... The END
Going to tweak a few spots around the course that were pointed out to me by William Munny then publish this dog track and take a nap....Couple days more and itll be out there for you all to destroy
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Post by Terry Grayson on Mar 10, 2018 19:19:13 GMT -5
The dog track has been published... Hope you enjoy
Thanks
Terry
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